Peer Review
- Adam Murphy, Alex McGregory
- Jun 8, 2018
- 1 min read
What do you like?
What don't you like?
What could I improve?
Adam Murphy:
I like how you have shaped the skirt and your characters body/head proportions are good. You can tell that your character is anime influenced and it really shows through in the model.
I don't like the lack of textures, and on your concept art, your character has hair, which is missing on the model. I think the model would look better with hair.
You could improve the shape of the shoes.
Alex Gregory:
I like your model. I can see what you were going for and what type of game it will be.
I don't like the eye holes, I think they are too big for the face.
The eye sockets could be improved by making them a more realistic shape.
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